Well after reading through the book and going over some of the reviews, I feel that I could make Nalia's first story slightly better. I'm not going to change plots, scenes or characters. But as I read through there are a lot of things that I left in my head and failed to put on the page. With that said, Nalia and the Potion Maker will be getting a slight make-over. Don't worry nothing too dramatic though.
I will update everyone when the changes go up.